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Dear Ben, Abed, Megan, DJ, and Robin,

While I know that you are using Google Docs, I hope you will find this particular page helpful. As it is now here you can put all of your work into this page and work back and forth as necessary. If you have questions about using it, please let me know.

Dr. Martin

Rough Draft [|Healthy PersuAsian Rough Draft.docx]

I edited the draft, but it still needs more of your information for instance:
 * the highlighted areas on the document need to be changed, at the beginning of the cover letter there needs to be the address and other information on the person we are sending it to, NOT our information
 * we need charts and graphs that back up your research
 * research is a problem in general because I read through all the text and the majority of the text is on stuff we could have researched, but simply didn't. Research is the main thing we need though, I can't stress that enough..

here is the edited draft, I will keep updating it as more changes are made.

Here is my revised draft fell free to make changes as needed.

even more edited:

(Abed) I found a website with tons of charts and graphs about Bloomsburg's incomes, wages, earnings. []